Tanhaa Safar

Tanhaa Safar
Tanhaa Safar

Wednesday, May 9, 2007

Tu dekhe hai aina, aur poochhe rang mera
kaise kahoon kaisa hoon, jo sang nahi tera

Jag jeetan ko atur, Do ankhein hain teri
Sab harne ko vyakul, ik dil hai mera

sone chandi ki duniya, ye khwab hain tere
Daulat apni ik kalam, bechna syahi kam mera

Duniya ik bazaar, tu bikne ko taiyar khari
Darveshon si poshap, khali hath hai mera

chakackoundh roshni, sohrat hasrat teri
ik gumnaam kabr, Afroz hai kismat meri

5 comments:

Kumar Anshul said...

Bahut acchhe se capture kiya hai aapne.

"Duniya ik bazaar, tu bikne ko taiyar khari
Darveshon si poshak, khali hath hai mera"

Beautifully captured the helplessness. Sufi touch bhi acchha laga.

Nidhi Bajaj said...

beautiful poem... aue words nahi hain. wohi same sawaal kya soch ke likhi?

Piyush k Mishra said...

main kahta tha pahle ki tu bachchon sa likhta hai...
magar ab nahin kahta
kya sahi bhaav aate hain ab tere lafzon mein
bahut hi achhi hai
excellent

प्रवीण परिहार said...

बहुत बढीया। कोशिश करे कि देवनागरी में लिख सके। यदि कोई दिक्कत हो तो बताऎं।

Afroz said...

Thanks Anshul..
@Nidhi.. As usual.. bas aspas ke mahaul ko dekhkar

@Piyush,.. Thanks bhai

@Praveen Ji.. Main koshish karunga.. thanks